Further Up

Further Up

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On writing sad fiction

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Bethel McGrew
Aug 25, 2021
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Recently, I was giving some feedback to a friend after finishing the first draft of his latest novel. It was a pleasurable exercise, this friend being both a smart writer and a receptive listener. But I had to confess to him that I was disappointed by the end.

The story had begun promisingly: In brief, a successful New England businessman wakes up from …

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